Ashaya Post
Game Discussion => General Discussion => Topic started by: toby on January 03, 2012, 10:51:28 pm
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If you roamed around Saliko Village and the forest that surrounds it, you probably found items and monsters that are just there - and that don't really serve a purpose. Forest bugs that scurry around the grass, flimsy webs that you get from spiders - sure, you can kill them for experience, or sell them to Janette after you realized that you can't do anything else with that, but that's all you can do. This needs to change!
In this contest, you write one (or more, if you feel creative!) quest (quests) that takes place in the village, or the forest. They shouldn't be anything fancy! We have fancy quests where you help Choco, where you fight Cladt, or save Sophie from the deep mines.
These quests should be simple. Simple meaning, getting items from (non-guardian*) monsters that haven't been used yet, or killing regular (non-guardian*) monsters that usually don't get killed. Now, if an item or monster is already used for a quest, that's still okay - but try to limit your quests to items and monsters that aren't commonly used. For example, Lavender is used in Alchemy, so it is commonly used. Bug feelers, on the other hand, aren't really used (except for a headgear that only few people get anyway). If you look over to Rose, she will have a new quest for you ("Repaid Efforts") - that could be a good example how your quest could work.
Now, what do you need to do?
Every contest submission must - at the very least - have:
- The NPC that should offer the quest.
- Exactly, word-for-word, what the NPC should say when you click it, and they offer the quest.
- A one-sentence summary what the player needs to do (what's shown under "Objective").
- Exactly, word-for-word what the NPC should say when you did everything they asked for.
- Suggestions what the reward should be.
Things you can use in your quest:
- Any item that's in game.
- You can create new items - less complicated is better. For example, if you kill Forest Bugs, you'll notice they drop a new item, "Sticky Mucus", which is used in Rose's quest. Adding an item is okay for your quest. You don't need to draw the item.
- Any non-guardian* monster that's in game (no new monsters allowed).
- Any location and NPC in Saliko or Saliko Forest (no new NPCs or locations allowed).
- As a reward, you may also suggest a new item and equipment that should be created. If you do that, note that every player will be able to obtain it, and that it will have stats of a level 8-12 non-dungeon item. You don't need to draw the item.
Important: To be eligible to win, there are two more requirements:
- I need to be able to use the quest (and the items) in-game, so you will need grant me permission to use quest and items forever and ever in this game.
- You need to have been an active player recently (this means you logged in at least once in the past two weeks, and your account is in good standing, meaning not suspended or restricted). If you don't know whether you are eligible, send me a private message.
What's in it for you?
- First of all, if your quest is among the winners, it will be added to the game, and you will be given credits. The credits will be at the bottom of the quest text itself, as well as in the main game credits, which will include a link to your website or deviantArt.
- Second, I will chose winners according to how creative, well written quests are, and how easy they are to implement (no escort quests). The first place will get 750 dA points (or the equivalent as an Amazon gift card), the second one 375, the third one 200, the fourth and fifth one 100. If enough good contest entries were submitted, I will start a new chain (i.e. 2x750, 2x375, 2x200, 2x100, 2x100).
You can either submit your entry by posting a reply here, or by sending me a private message here on the forum.
The contest will end in one week, on January 10, 2011, 23:59 PM PT.
*) Unless you make a chain of multiple quests, then the final quest may involve a guardian.
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Quick question. Can it also like, add a new recipe to like alchemy or cooking?
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Quick question. Can it also like, add a new recipe to like alchemy or cooking?
Short answer: Yes, but.
Long answer:
Yes, but that should not be the focus of the quest. The quest should be specifically to get items from these monsters, or the monsters themselves killed, and the NPC should have a believable reason for that.
For example, Rose has a good reason why you need to bring her that mucus and the spider legs - she's out of ingredients, and she needs more. She's a witch, so those ingredients fit. For Will, the priest, something else might work.
Anything stat related I'll have to decide, but again, it should not be driving point. What you get should simply be a small reward for your efforts, nothing more.
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I GPT A GOOD ONE make kay have you to kill 10 snow fliffys beacuse she said that they come in the village and annoy her by hopping on everything! and she gives you 2 gold token things :3 good?
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I GPT A GOOD ONE make kay have you to kill 10 snow fliffys beacuse she said that they come in the village and annoy her by hopping on everything! and she gives you 2 gold token things :3 good?
Read the contest rules, in particular the "must-have"s. ;P
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*You walk passed Choco who sees you and jumps up*
Hey Birk! Can you do me a favor? I’m doing a special project for Alchemy class, experimenting with combinations to make a brand new potion! If it works, I could enter it and maybe even win the science fair! Problem is I’m running out of ingredients. I’d go gather some more but I promised to help Janette at the Café today. Could you gather them for me?
*She hands you a paper with a list of ingredients on it*
Yeah, I know, it’s a bit of a long list but I’d appreciate the help.
Objective
Choco would like you to gather twenty clover, fifteen bug shells, ten carrots, and five sticky mucus for her class project.
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(next part is for if u go in the cafe and click choco again without having all items to finish quest)
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Hi Birk!
Did you get all the ingredients yet?
*You shake your head. Choco’s smile turns to a frown*
I really need those ingredients…maybe I should ask someone else?
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(Next part is when finishing quest)
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*You walk up to Choco who has just finished talking to Janette. She smiles and yells*
Birk, your back already!! Wow your fast! Did you get all the ingredients?
*You hand her a bag with all the items she requested*
Oh boy! Yep this will be just what I need! Thank you so much for your help! By the way, while you were gone, Janette gave me seven Empty Bottles for my project and fifty two silver for helping her out today.
*She holds out her hand and gives you the silver*
Here you can have the silver for helping me. Now I better get back on my project if I wanna win!
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Quest ends
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Quest Notes:
Choco should disappear after you accept the quest. You won’t see her in Saliko village map till you complete or abandon quest. If you enter Janette’s café she will be there though. Once you click complete quest she will return to her spot in Saliko village. Oh and the places that say "Birk" is where u have a insert name spot. :3
I hope this is the right place to submit the quest ideas. :o
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good quest idea birk :D
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I hope this is the right place to submit the quest ideas. :o
Yup, it's the right place.
A little note, simplicity is key. Making NPCs appear and disappear is about the maximum complexity I accept, but even better if it's done without any of that.
In your case, it would require a new spawn of Choco in the café, and a new NPC registration (Choco in the village and the café would be separate NPCs), as well as additional phasing criteria on both, the café and the village NPC - things get complex very quickly.
Anyhow, entry accepted. ;P
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-starter of the quest- you ask kay if you could have a poition and she askes you this insted of asking witch one you would like:ive been trying to make a poition that will make someone invinceible but the one I made only lasts 5 seconds but...if you get some spikes from the lizards and some dust from the energy clouds i could make one that lasts for 5 minites. But i cant get them beacuse they are too strong for me. maybe you could get them for me? (you need five of them both) -the quest if u still didnt gget the stuff- Did you get the ingredients??? *you say no* Awww please get them then we could have a chance to defend our selfs. -when u complete- OH BOY you get them thank you ill give you 2 for your adventures! *you gets 2 invinceibleity poitions* good quest? id think it is myself :3
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I was wondering... the plains and cave in the coralspike lizard areas. Are they included? Just wanted to make sure so I didn't add them into my quest if It's not allowed.
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Another question, can there be like we can have a mix, like with Kay's quest for her potions?
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Here's My entry! I just hope that i went along the rules. ^^
Quest for Alexandra Gibson (Fur Dyer)
As you walk past, Alexandra calls you over to her
“Why hello there -insert character name-.” *She smiles before continuing.* “I was wondering if you could do me a favor. As you probably already know, I dye furs. However, I've recently run low on a few dyes, and unfortunately, I’ve been unable to contact my regular supplier of dyes. They did send me a few recipes for making replacement dyes in case something like this were to happen. Unfortunately, I have recently gone low on supplies for making my dyes. *Alexandra sighs, then looks at you* I was wondering if you could go into the forest and find me ingredients for me to make my dyes. I'd go myself, but I have to finish a report that Ashylia asked me to write. I need twenty five carrots, twenty clovers, fifteen ferns, and ten lumps of earth. You can get the ferns and pieces of earth from those caterpillars. However, since there are several types of earths, could you bring me twice as much, just to be sure? I know it seems a little much, but you should be able to find enough of each ingredient. Please -insert character name-, could you help me?
Objective
Alexandra wants you to get ingredients for her to make dyes.
In Progress
Oh hello Kitson. Have you found the ingredients I asked you for? *You say that you're still looking for them and remember that you got distracted by a fliffy.* oh, well, while these ingredients are good, i still need more. could you please go looking for some more of them?
Completed
Oh hello again -Player name-. Did you find all the ingredients?
Quest turned in
Thank You so much Kitson! Alexandra smiles before putting her paw in her pocket Here we go. Here's some gold for helping me out She hands you the gold and giggles Come by anytime you want to check out my colors or want a fur dye!
Rewards
3 Gold and 75 silver
This is my Entry for the contest. I hope i went according to the rules. ^^
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Toby, Mela and I are in a mad rush to finish the quest cuz i just found this today(1/8/12) but we're half way done xD
But if (although probly it wont get put in since the rush xD) gets put in can we split the prize or does it have to be a 1 person thing?
Srry we do everything together xD
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part 1
*On the way to the caves, you see Jiana again hugging her pet fliffy, Sophie.*
*She waves you down and you greet her*
Hello Mela!
Do you remember Sophie? She was the fliffy you saved from the East Caves! (Sophie looks up at you, smiles, and twitches her nose.) Anyway , I wanted to talk to you about something else. Sandra, from the garden in Saliko Villiage, is a old family friend and her birthday is coming up. Last year for my birthday she got me these gold earrings, so i wanted to get her something pretty like that. Sadly, I spent all my money on a hairpin to match the earrings. >< So, I was wondering if you would mind collecting some items from the monsters found in the forest, so i can make her favorite meal?
*She hands you a list of items*
Thank you so much! HURRY BACK!
Objective-
Jianna needs to collect the following:
0/24 lavender
0/20 mushrooms(would be dropped by caterpillars)
0/6 firebloom flowers
0/1 plate (Jannete could sell these like the pen for the analyse quest)
0/3 fliffy skins(would be used for wrapping the present)
Reward-
2 g
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(If you haven’t finished the quest yet and you click on her)
You’re finished already? That was impossibly quick!
*she looks at the items you show her and frowns*
Oh, you haven’t gotten them all yet? Well....that’s oki! Just please hurry! =^-^=
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*You hand Jianna the ingredients*
Oh! You got every single item that I needed! And so quickly! Thank you so much!
*She hands you 2 gold coins*
*You watch as she mixes, slices, and dices the items then carefully wraps the full plate in the fliffy skins.*
Would you mind taking this to Sandra for me?
*She pulls a pink bow from her pocket and puts it on the package then hands it to you.*
Thank you, Mela!
Objective-
Jianna would like you to take the meal to Sandra in the Saliko Garden.
Reward-
40 silver
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*Sandra looks up from her work when she hears you approching*
Hello there! What can i do for you?
*You explain how Jianna sent you to deliver the meal*
Oh, thank you! It’s my favorite! How kind of her!
*She hands you a handful of silver as thanks for bringing her the present.*
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part 2 ***This is an extra part that you could put in if you like the first part and want us to continue it :3*** (A mushroom hat will be offered here. I already have the drawing of the hat if you want to use it. If not, the rewards can be replaced with gold and/or potions.)
While your here, Mela, I was wondering if you could run to the forest witch for me? You see, since the last time you’ve been here, the branches in our trees seem to be getting extremely weak and breaking every time the wind blows by. This is an extreme danger if anyone were to be walking directly below when it happens. To avoid anyone getting hurt, would you mind running out to Rose’s place? I heard Alexandra talking with Luka about a new potion Rose had come up with and Alexandra’s plans to get the recipe. The potion is supposed to make plants stronger and firm. I would go to her house my self, but I’m too busy making sure people don’t enter the garden with the branches in their condition.
Don’t worry, I’ll be sure to pay you properly
Objective-
Sandra needs you to go to Rose the Forest Witch’s house and ask for her new potion.
Reward- 3 gold
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(If you are not done with the quest and you click on Sandra, she’ll say.....)
Oh! Have you gotten the potion already! Thank you!
-she notices you don’t have it-
Oh...could you hurry up with that? Someone might really get hurt if you don’t get that potion soon...
-she looks around with a worried face-
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*Rose watches you carefully as you approach her*
What are you doing here? Do you need something?
*You explain to Rose about the branches in the garden and how you would like her to make one of the new potions you had heard about*
Ah...I see...
Oki, I will make you one, but YOU have to get the ingredients. I don’t have extra time to waste on something as minor as this, so get going!
*She hands you the list*
Objective- Rose the Forest Witch needs you to gather the following for Sandra’s potion:
0/5 bushy forest herbs
0/20 sticky mucus
0/15 twisted bug feelers (Dropped by caterpillars and forest bugs**Looks like braided bug feelers and is made from 3 bug feelers twisted together to create a strong rope-like material)
0/10 lavender
0/5 mushrooms
0/2 greater spirtual herbs
Reward-
Mushroom Hat
(Toby, you pick stats xD Mela and I aren’t good at them)
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(If you click on Rose and you haven’t finished the quest yet)
-Rose looks at you, annoyed-
What are you doing here?! You don’t have all the ingredients yet! Stop wasting my time!
(you better hurry up before she bashes your brains in....or worse)
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*Rose grabs the items from your hands and starts mixing and boiling them*
Hrmmm.....there. I suppose that’s good enough.
*She hands you the potion and a hat that’s smells somewhat like mushrooms*
The hat is just because there were extra ingredients and I didn’t want them going to waste. Plus, I’ve grown a bit tolerant of you. Just don’t expect me to be nice to you on a regular basis or anything. Now go away. There are some trees that need that potion.
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*You hand the potion to Sandra and her face lights up with a delighted smile.*
Oh my! You got the potion! Thank you so much! I was so worried someone would walk in and (get their brains smashes in) be severely hurt if a branch were to fall on them. The garden is safe again! Thank you once again!
*Sandra hands you a few gold coins*
(ANYTHINGS IN PARENTHESIS ARE TO BE REMOVED!!!! IT’S EITHER INFORMATION FOR YOU OR MELA ACTING STUPID!!!) We got carried away incase you can't tell xD
I'll draw anything for the quest if you need me too and i have the mushroom hat all drawn out.
ALL SPELLCHECKS AND EDITING WAS DONE BY MELA SO BLAME HER!!
^ i did that to make her mad xD and i think i should have either done this in 2 post xD too late!!
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OH NO I FORGOT TO FIX THE DOUBLE SPACING YOU PUT IN BETWEEN SOME OF THE WORDS IT'S RUINED!!!
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I was wondering... the plains and cave in the coralspike lizard areas. Are they included? Just wanted to make sure so I didn't add them into my quest if It's not allowed.
Both areas are perfectly fine. ^-^
And Mela, Kitson, both entires are accepted. Good luck!
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Toby, Mela and I are in a mad rush to finish the quest cuz i just found this today(1/8/12) but we're half way done xD
But if (although probly it wont get put in since the rush xD) gets put in can we split the prize or does it have to be a 1 person thing?
Srry we do everything together xD
If it HAS to be a one person thing, give it to Berry. I'm just the editor ^_^
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If it HAS to be a one person thing, give it to Berry. I'm just the editor ^_^
You can split them up as you wish. ;P
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was mine exepted? D: you didnt say anything
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You said the first place prize was epuivelant to an Amazon gift card. Does that mean that we can choose between getting an Amazon Gift card or the points? If so, how much is it? Or were you just stating that it's equal?
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Is there anyway to edit post? I forgot some words and its that suppose to b word by word thing that's buggin me xD there probably is and I probably have my mouse rite above it xD
I got a lil excited over the quest contest >< And Mela is going to kill me if I don't fix all the errors in that post lol =^-^=
BTW that was me. Ignore any other messages I leave because I am clinically insane.
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was mine exepted? D: you didnt say anything
You're not meeting all the requirements. Your quest should state, clearly (and not intertwined with the quest text, so I have to quest):
- The NPC that should offer the quest.
- Exactly, word-for-word, what the NPC should say when you click it, and they offer the quest.
- A one-sentence summary what the player needs to do (what's shown under "Objective").
- Exactly, word-for-word what the NPC should say when you did everything they asked for.
- Suggestions what the reward should be.
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You said the first place prize was epuivelant to an Amazon gift card. Does that mean that we can choose between getting an Amazon Gift card or the points? If so, how much is it? Or were you just stating that it's equal?
Yup, you have can choose between the Amazon gift card, and the points. Whichever you choose, they'll be equal in that 100 DA points are $1.
Is there anyway to edit post? I forgot some words and its that suppose to b word by word thing that's buggin me xD there probably is and I probably have my mouse rite above it xD
You can post a new reply. ;P I will count the last reply you send before the deadline tomorrow.
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oh i forgot the objetive and it is -Objective- get 5 snow plains fliffy fur and frost spike hatchling spikes (dun rly remember the name of the items XD) and if it still isnt right idk what to say never made a game or anything like this before XD
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part 1
*On the way to the caves, you see Jiana again hugging her pet fliffy, Sophie.*
*She waves you down and you greet her*
Hello, <INSERT PLAYER NAME>!
Do you remember Sophie? She was the fliffy you saved from the East Caves! (Sophie looks up at you, smiles, and twitches her nose.) Anyway, I wanted to talk to you about something else. Sandra, from the garden in Saliko Village, is a old family friend and her birthday is coming up. Last year, for my birthday, she got me these gold earrings, so i wanted to get her something pretty like that. Sadly, I spent all my money on a hairpin to match the earrings. >< So, I was wondering if you would mind collecting some items from the monsters found in the forest, so i can make her favorite meal?
*She hands you a list of items*
Thank you so much! HURRY BACK!
Objective-
Jianna needs to collect the following:
0/24 lavender
0/20 mushrooms (could be dropped by caterpillars)
0/6 firebloom flowers
0/1 plate (Jannete could sell these like the pen for the analyse quest)
0/3 fliffy skins (would be used for wrapping the present)
Reward-
2g
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(If you haven’t finished the quest yet and you click on her)
You’re finished already? That was impossibly quick!
*she looks at the items you show her and frowns*
Oh, you haven’t gotten them all yet? Well....that’s oki! Just please hurry! =^-^=
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*You hand Jianna the ingredients*
Oh! You got every single item that I needed! And so quickly! Thank you so much!
*She hands you 2 gold coins*
*You watch as she mixes, slices, and dices the items then carefully wraps the full plate in the fliffy skins.*
Would you mind taking this to Sandra for me?
*She pulls a pink bow from her pocket and puts it on the package then hands it to you.*
Thank you, <INSERT PLAYER NAME>!
Objective-
Jianna would like you to take the meal to Sandra in the Saliko Garden.
Reward-
40 silver
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*Sandra looks up from her work when she hears you approching*
Hello there! What can i do for you?
*You explain how Jianna sent you to deliver the meal*
Oh, thank you! It’s my favorite! How kind of her!
*She hands you a handful of silver as thanks for bringing her the present.*
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part 2 ***This is an extra part that you could put in if you like the first part and want us to continue it :3*** (A mushroom hat will be offered here. I already have the drawing of the hat if you want to use it. If not, the rewards can be replaced with gold and/or potions.)
While your here, <INSERT PLAYER NAME>, I was wondering if you could run to the forest witch for me? You see, since the last time you’ve been here, the branches in our trees seem to be getting extremely weak and breaking every time the wind blows by. This is an extreme danger if anyone were to be walking directly below when it happens. To avoid anyone getting hurt, would you mind running out to Rose’s place? I heard Alexandra talking with Luka about a new potion Rose had come up with and Alexandra’s plans to get the recipe. The potion is supposed to make plants stronger and firm. I would go to her house myself, but I’m too busy making sure people don’t enter the garden with the branches in their condition.
Don’t worry, I’ll be sure to pay you properly!
Objective-
Sandra needs you to go to Rose, the Forest Witch’s house and ask for her new potion.
Reward- 3 gold
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(If you are not done with the quest and you click on Sandra, she’ll say.....)
Oh! Have you gotten the potion already! Thank you!
-she notices you don’t have it-
Oh...could you hurry up with that? Someone might really get hurt if you don’t get that potion soon...
-she looks around with a worried face-
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*Rose watches you carefully as you approach her*
What are you doing here? Do you need something?
*You explain to Rose about the branches in the garden and how you would like her to make one of the new potions you had heard about*
Ah...I see...
Oki, I will make you one, but YOU have to get the ingredients. I don’t have extra time to waste on something as minor as this, so get going!
*She hands you the list*
Objective- Rose the Forest Witch needs you to gather the following for Sandra’s potion:
0/5 bushy forest herbs
0/20 sticky mucus
0/15 twisted bug feelers (Could be dropped by caterpillars and forest bugs**Looks like braided bug feelers and is made from 3 bug feelers twisted together to create a strong rope-like material)
0/10 lavender
0/5 mushrooms
0/2 greater spirtual herbs
Reward-
Mushroom Hat
(Toby, you pick stats xD Mela and I aren't good at them)
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(If you click on Rose and you haven’t finished the quest yet)
-Rose looks at you, annoyed-
What are you doing here?! You don’t have all the ingredients yet! Stop wasting my time!
(you better hurry up before she bashes your brains in....or worse. MAKES YOU EXPLODE)
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*Rose grabs the items from your hands and starts mixing and boiling them*
Hrmmm.....there. I suppose that’s good enough.
*She hands you the potion and a hat that’s smells somewhat like mushrooms*
The hat is just because there were extra ingredients and I didn’t want them going to waste. Plus, I’ve grown a bit tolerant of you. Just don’t expect me to be nice to you on a regular basis or anything. Now go away. There are some trees that need that potion.
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*You hand the potion to Sandra and her face lights up with a delighted smile.*
Oh my! You got the potion! Thank you so much! I was so worried someone would walk in and (get their brains smashes in) be severely hurt if a branch were to fall on them. The garden is safe again! Thank you once again!
*Sandra hands you a few gold coins*
(ANYTHINGS IN PARENTHESIS ARE TO BE REMOVED!!!! IT’S EITHER INFORMATION FOR YOU OR MELA ACTING STUPID!!!) We got carried away incase you can't tell xD
I'll draw anything for the quest if you need me too and i have the mushroom hat all drawn out.
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GRAHHH MAN!!!! I JUST SENT THE FIXED VERSON TO HIM!!!! -I'm a failure- XD
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The deadline has passed, and I will look at all the contest entries I received.
You should expect an update here by the weekend.
Thanks to everyone who participated!