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Kitson

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« on: July 09, 2012, 05:48:16 pm »
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I'm sorry, but my Grammar OCD just wouldn't let me ignore this. XD Jacob said "Some of the demons snuck past to old bench!" Now, I read it a few times, and reversed it: "To old bench some of the demons snuck past!" The last part there sounds right, but the beginning sounds like you want to go there, instead of that the demons got there. I suggest to edit it to "Snuck past to the old bench!" Would be a lot better.
« Last Edit: July 12, 2012, 12:27:31 am by toby »

Tobias

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« Reply #1 on: July 12, 2012, 12:27:21 am »
Fixed - well done! People have run this dungeon well over a hundred times, and no one ever noticed. XD

My grammar isn't that bad - usually - but I mess around with sentences a lot, and sometimes I just end up forgetting a word. Now that I read it, it's obvious that it's wrong. ;P